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I don't mean "sitting down to write", I mean the literal beginning. The story itself starts with my protagonist running. I need to get him to run, then I'll have the rest of it sorted. But won't starting with "He ran" sound cheap? Should I add something before? Or should I just go straight with "He ran. This and that happened, so now he's being chased"? Or maybe it would be better to start with describing "this and that" and then progress to the running sequence? The "this and that" wouldn't have much to do with the story, so I worry whether it won't be just a filler and won't bore the reader.
That's what I'm worried of the most, that I would bore them before anything would start.










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    If this is what is stopping you from writing your story then you have 2 options. Just write down something simple like "He ran" and edit it later. Or start writing the next scene and start writing this one later when you have more of an idea what this scene will look like.
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  • You may want to check out our getting-started and openings tags.
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    Related, possible duplicates: How to think of a good beginning? and How to open a novel?
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  • These answers of mine address this question well: writing.stackexchange.com/a/36356/26047 is "On Writer's Block" for coming up with a plot and what to write (A discovery writer's approach), and writing.stackexchange.com/a/36551/26047 is on Where Do I Start, for getting through the first 50 pages or so.
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I don't mean "sitting down to write", I mean the literal beginning. The story itself starts with my protagonist running. I need to get him to run, then I'll have the rest of it sorted. But won't starting with "He ran" sound cheap? Should I add something before? Or should I just go straight with "He ran. This and that happened, so now he's being chased"? Or maybe it would be better to start with describing "this and that" and then progress to the running sequence? The "this and that" wouldn't have much to do with the story, so I worry whether it won't be just a filler and won't bore the reader.
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    If this is what is stopping you from writing your story then you have 2 options. Just write down something simple like "He ran" and edit it later. Or start writing the next scene and start writing this one later when you have more of an idea what this scene will look like.
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    Related, possible duplicates: How to think of a good beginning? and How to open a novel?
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  • These answers of mine address this question well: writing.stackexchange.com/a/36356/26047 is "On Writer's Block" for coming up with a plot and what to write (A discovery writer's approach), and writing.stackexchange.com/a/36551/26047 is on Where Do I Start, for getting through the first 50 pages or so.
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I don't mean "sitting down to write", I mean the literal beginning. The story itself starts with my protagonist running. I need to get him to run, then I'll have the rest of it sorted. But won't starting with "He ran" sound cheap? Should I add something before? Or should I just go straight with "He ran. This and that happened, so now he's being chased"? Or maybe it would be better to start with describing "this and that" and then progress to the running sequence? The "this and that" wouldn't have much to do with the story, so I worry whether it won't be just a filler and won't bore the reader.
That's what I'm worried of the most, that I would bore them before anything would start.










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I don't mean "sitting down to write", I mean the literal beginning. The story itself starts with my protagonist running. I need to get him to run, then I'll have the rest of it sorted. But won't starting with "He ran" sound cheap? Should I add something before? Or should I just go straight with "He ran. This and that happened, so now he's being chased"? Or maybe it would be better to start with describing "this and that" and then progress to the running sequence? The "this and that" wouldn't have much to do with the story, so I worry whether it won't be just a filler and won't bore the reader.
That's what I'm worried of the most, that I would bore them before anything would start.







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    If this is what is stopping you from writing your story then you have 2 options. Just write down something simple like "He ran" and edit it later. Or start writing the next scene and start writing this one later when you have more of an idea what this scene will look like.
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  • You may want to check out our getting-started and openings tags.
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    Related, possible duplicates: How to think of a good beginning? and How to open a novel?
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  • These answers of mine address this question well: writing.stackexchange.com/a/36356/26047 is "On Writer's Block" for coming up with a plot and what to write (A discovery writer's approach), and writing.stackexchange.com/a/36551/26047 is on Where Do I Start, for getting through the first 50 pages or so.
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    If this is what is stopping you from writing your story then you have 2 options. Just write down something simple like "He ran" and edit it later. Or start writing the next scene and start writing this one later when you have more of an idea what this scene will look like.
    – Totumus Maximus
    Nov 30 at 8:58










  • You may want to check out our getting-started and openings tags.
    – a CVn
    Nov 30 at 8:58








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    Related, possible duplicates: How to think of a good beginning? and How to open a novel?
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  • These answers of mine address this question well: writing.stackexchange.com/a/36356/26047 is "On Writer's Block" for coming up with a plot and what to write (A discovery writer's approach), and writing.stackexchange.com/a/36551/26047 is on Where Do I Start, for getting through the first 50 pages or so.
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If this is what is stopping you from writing your story then you have 2 options. Just write down something simple like "He ran" and edit it later. Or start writing the next scene and start writing this one later when you have more of an idea what this scene will look like.
– Totumus Maximus
Nov 30 at 8:58




If this is what is stopping you from writing your story then you have 2 options. Just write down something simple like "He ran" and edit it later. Or start writing the next scene and start writing this one later when you have more of an idea what this scene will look like.
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Nov 30 at 8:58












You may want to check out our getting-started and openings tags.
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You may want to check out our getting-started and openings tags.
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Related, possible duplicates: How to think of a good beginning? and How to open a novel?
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Related, possible duplicates: How to think of a good beginning? and How to open a novel?
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These answers of mine address this question well: writing.stackexchange.com/a/36356/26047 is "On Writer's Block" for coming up with a plot and what to write (A discovery writer's approach), and writing.stackexchange.com/a/36551/26047 is on Where Do I Start, for getting through the first 50 pages or so.
– Amadeus
Nov 30 at 15:06






These answers of mine address this question well: writing.stackexchange.com/a/36356/26047 is "On Writer's Block" for coming up with a plot and what to write (A discovery writer's approach), and writing.stackexchange.com/a/36551/26047 is on Where Do I Start, for getting through the first 50 pages or so.
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The first part of a book / story should almost always be the normal life before the event that really pushes the story forward.



If you don't want to do that, you need to ask yourself why he's running. If he's running for a reason (emergency, he's in danger etc.) then "he ran" is absolutely fine.



You can also decide how much information you want to give at this point. Saying something like "Looking over his shoulder again, he ran. His breath, laboured as he struggled to fill his lungs while his suit jacket flapped around him." You reader knows he's running and he's scared but doesn't know what he's running from. Or towards.



Equally, you could start the book where he doesn't want to run (over did it at the gym last night and his legs are really hurting today?) but by the end of the chapter, something else has happened that means you can end that chapter with "he ran."






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    I'm afraid I have to disagree with 'almost always'. I do like action books that kick off with an action scene and then fill in the blanks as the story progresses. But +1 for the rest of the answer.
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    And you are welcome to disagree and I can 100% see both sides of the argument on it. A book like the Martian wouldn't draw you in if Watney's first words weren't all the ways he could die having been left on Mars but equally, in Terry Pratchett's Night Watch, having his main character wake up in the past after the lightening strike wouldn't have worked if we hadn't seen him being a policeman and doing police work before this event.
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    @SaraCosta An Action Book may start off with action, because that IS the normal life of an MC like 007 or Han Solo. The danger of starting off with action is that the reader doesn't know any characters or whether they like them, thus the stakes for the reader are low, they don't care. Guy A and Guy B are shooting at each other and I'm not automatically invested in the MC or antagonistic toward the apparent villain, if the story is standalone. The normal world can have action or conflict in it, but the action should be there to let us get to know the MC and how they deal with things.
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  • @Stephen: Thanks. I'm afraid I may have made that comment a bit hotly. I've been looking for a book to offer, and I always read the first page at the store to get a feel for it. Unfortunately, I read over twenty beginnings and they were all so predictably 'normal life before the inciting incident' that when I read the first line of your answer with 'almost always' I just kind of blew. Sorry.
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    @SaraCosta Well, inconsequential "action" of that kind (running, changing a flat tire, moving about) is pretty much how I start every story. I was mistaken, I thought you were talking about a fight, not just an activity. I will agree with that, I never open with even one sentence of exposition or back-story or explanation; the first word of every book I write (at least on first draft) is the name of the MC doing something physical; usually related to her job or everyday life, and usually dealing with some every day kind of normal life problem or issue, a minor conflict creating interest.
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The opening lines generally set the tone of the book. Why are you starting with your protagonist running? Is that the theme of the story, are they running away from something physical or emotional?



Take the first line from Pride and Prejudice:



"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife"



That is indeed the main motivation of Bingley, Mr Colins and even Darcy and Wickham. It's also the preoccupation of (most) of the female characters. The opening line sets the expectations of the reader for what is going to follow.



So my answer is to think about the overall theme of your story and write a beginning that informs the reader of the journey they are about to embark on. The art is doing that without being blatantly obvious about it.






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    I am free to disagree. People like twists.
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  • While it's true twists are great, I do believe most beginnings set the tone. Maybe you don't get sort of the theme for the whole novel in words, but that's another thing. If a story starts with someone running, for example, I expect that running (literally or figuratively) will be an important part of the plot.
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    Opening line of the Illiad: "Rage. Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles…" and yup, guess what the story is about, and it ends when that rage ends… Jane Austin is a fantastic opening because it seems a fact, then immediately sarcastic (TWIST!)..., but actually turns out to be real (TWIST AGAIN).
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You don't have to just say "He ran", your opening sets the stage for where the action takes place and gives us insight into the character. You can state things about the environment, what the character is thinking as he is running, what the character looks like or what their background may have been like before they had to run.




Shadows danced over the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway as he ran past streetlights and illuminated windows.




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It seemed as though the shadows themselves were chasing him as he ran through the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway, no matter how fast he ran the shadows kept up.




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His tailored suit flapped wildly as he ran along the graffitied alleyway, his slicked back hair disheveled from his frantic running.







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    Lots of fine answers here, and as many good choices for you. Starting with the running is great stuff if that's what your book is about. 'In medias res' is the formal phrase for it, and that tells you how often it happens.



    But don't underestimate the moments before the running starts. It doesn't have to be boring, it can definitely be used to ratchet up the tension. Maybe he spots one of his pursuers, but he doesn't know what the others look like. He tries to blend in with a group and casually exit, but then runs into the partner.



    Or maybe he's part of a group watching a dead-drop to see who collects the bundle of cash, and he's on the coms with his own partner. Then a maintenance truck blocks his view of the park bench, and by the time he gets through a crowd of people, the backpack is gone. He spots two people running in different directions!



    The point is, the reader knows weapons are about to be drawn, and the running will start any moment. You have a chance to define good guys and bad guys, and display a bit of your protagonist's personality while building tension. You're just tightening up the spring until it snaps and the running starts.






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      Disclaimer: this answer relies on my own experience and may not fit your needs.



      If you story starts with someone running, then there must be a lot of action later.



      Even if it's wrong, this will be the first assumption of the reader while reading it.
      I will not go in detail about this because Matt Hollands' answer is already covering it pretty well.



      The same way, if you begin a book setting a date, let's say "2014", you unconsciously know the story will stretch on months or even years. But if you start with "monday", your whole story won't probably last more than a few days, which set different expectations to the reader.



      If you begin In Medias Res, start answering question early instead of piling them.



      Years ago I wrote a series of short stories that somehow get published in a small magazine, and the first one literally started with "He ran" ("He" being the name of the protagonist).



      At the time, my litterature teacher told me it worked because within the next sentences, I was explaining the threat from who he was running from (who was after him and why), and the setting which was important for the rest of the story (empty streets after a curfew, troops of Guards looking for offenders, wanted posters with his face on it, etc.).



      The important thing here is: your "this and that" must not be a filler. If your character is running, there is a reason for it and your firsts paragraphs must expand on that reason. If it is unrelated to what follows in the story, then your MC running may not be the good approach.



      Then, when the threat is gone temporarily, the protagonist may rest and have a flashback about how he got there (probably not the best follow-up, but that's what I did at the time).



      Now the whole "You probably wonder how I got there"-flashback thing may sound silly, but it is exactly what you see or read in most of action movies nowadays. It is the stinger, or the hook of the story. A little digest of what could happen later: action and mystery. Your "hook" reflects what the reader will find later in the book; if the reader adhere with your first chapter, you already know he will read the rest.






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        The first part of a book / story should almost always be the normal life before the event that really pushes the story forward.



        If you don't want to do that, you need to ask yourself why he's running. If he's running for a reason (emergency, he's in danger etc.) then "he ran" is absolutely fine.



        You can also decide how much information you want to give at this point. Saying something like "Looking over his shoulder again, he ran. His breath, laboured as he struggled to fill his lungs while his suit jacket flapped around him." You reader knows he's running and he's scared but doesn't know what he's running from. Or towards.



        Equally, you could start the book where he doesn't want to run (over did it at the gym last night and his legs are really hurting today?) but by the end of the chapter, something else has happened that means you can end that chapter with "he ran."






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          I'm afraid I have to disagree with 'almost always'. I do like action books that kick off with an action scene and then fill in the blanks as the story progresses. But +1 for the rest of the answer.
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          And you are welcome to disagree and I can 100% see both sides of the argument on it. A book like the Martian wouldn't draw you in if Watney's first words weren't all the ways he could die having been left on Mars but equally, in Terry Pratchett's Night Watch, having his main character wake up in the past after the lightening strike wouldn't have worked if we hadn't seen him being a policeman and doing police work before this event.
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          @SaraCosta An Action Book may start off with action, because that IS the normal life of an MC like 007 or Han Solo. The danger of starting off with action is that the reader doesn't know any characters or whether they like them, thus the stakes for the reader are low, they don't care. Guy A and Guy B are shooting at each other and I'm not automatically invested in the MC or antagonistic toward the apparent villain, if the story is standalone. The normal world can have action or conflict in it, but the action should be there to let us get to know the MC and how they deal with things.
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        • @Stephen: Thanks. I'm afraid I may have made that comment a bit hotly. I've been looking for a book to offer, and I always read the first page at the store to get a feel for it. Unfortunately, I read over twenty beginnings and they were all so predictably 'normal life before the inciting incident' that when I read the first line of your answer with 'almost always' I just kind of blew. Sorry.
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          @SaraCosta Well, inconsequential "action" of that kind (running, changing a flat tire, moving about) is pretty much how I start every story. I was mistaken, I thought you were talking about a fight, not just an activity. I will agree with that, I never open with even one sentence of exposition or back-story or explanation; the first word of every book I write (at least on first draft) is the name of the MC doing something physical; usually related to her job or everyday life, and usually dealing with some every day kind of normal life problem or issue, a minor conflict creating interest.
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        The first part of a book / story should almost always be the normal life before the event that really pushes the story forward.



        If you don't want to do that, you need to ask yourself why he's running. If he's running for a reason (emergency, he's in danger etc.) then "he ran" is absolutely fine.



        You can also decide how much information you want to give at this point. Saying something like "Looking over his shoulder again, he ran. His breath, laboured as he struggled to fill his lungs while his suit jacket flapped around him." You reader knows he's running and he's scared but doesn't know what he's running from. Or towards.



        Equally, you could start the book where he doesn't want to run (over did it at the gym last night and his legs are really hurting today?) but by the end of the chapter, something else has happened that means you can end that chapter with "he ran."






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          I'm afraid I have to disagree with 'almost always'. I do like action books that kick off with an action scene and then fill in the blanks as the story progresses. But +1 for the rest of the answer.
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          And you are welcome to disagree and I can 100% see both sides of the argument on it. A book like the Martian wouldn't draw you in if Watney's first words weren't all the ways he could die having been left on Mars but equally, in Terry Pratchett's Night Watch, having his main character wake up in the past after the lightening strike wouldn't have worked if we hadn't seen him being a policeman and doing police work before this event.
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          @SaraCosta An Action Book may start off with action, because that IS the normal life of an MC like 007 or Han Solo. The danger of starting off with action is that the reader doesn't know any characters or whether they like them, thus the stakes for the reader are low, they don't care. Guy A and Guy B are shooting at each other and I'm not automatically invested in the MC or antagonistic toward the apparent villain, if the story is standalone. The normal world can have action or conflict in it, but the action should be there to let us get to know the MC and how they deal with things.
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        • @Stephen: Thanks. I'm afraid I may have made that comment a bit hotly. I've been looking for a book to offer, and I always read the first page at the store to get a feel for it. Unfortunately, I read over twenty beginnings and they were all so predictably 'normal life before the inciting incident' that when I read the first line of your answer with 'almost always' I just kind of blew. Sorry.
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          @SaraCosta Well, inconsequential "action" of that kind (running, changing a flat tire, moving about) is pretty much how I start every story. I was mistaken, I thought you were talking about a fight, not just an activity. I will agree with that, I never open with even one sentence of exposition or back-story or explanation; the first word of every book I write (at least on first draft) is the name of the MC doing something physical; usually related to her job or everyday life, and usually dealing with some every day kind of normal life problem or issue, a minor conflict creating interest.
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        The first part of a book / story should almost always be the normal life before the event that really pushes the story forward.



        If you don't want to do that, you need to ask yourself why he's running. If he's running for a reason (emergency, he's in danger etc.) then "he ran" is absolutely fine.



        You can also decide how much information you want to give at this point. Saying something like "Looking over his shoulder again, he ran. His breath, laboured as he struggled to fill his lungs while his suit jacket flapped around him." You reader knows he's running and he's scared but doesn't know what he's running from. Or towards.



        Equally, you could start the book where he doesn't want to run (over did it at the gym last night and his legs are really hurting today?) but by the end of the chapter, something else has happened that means you can end that chapter with "he ran."






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        The first part of a book / story should almost always be the normal life before the event that really pushes the story forward.



        If you don't want to do that, you need to ask yourself why he's running. If he's running for a reason (emergency, he's in danger etc.) then "he ran" is absolutely fine.



        You can also decide how much information you want to give at this point. Saying something like "Looking over his shoulder again, he ran. His breath, laboured as he struggled to fill his lungs while his suit jacket flapped around him." You reader knows he's running and he's scared but doesn't know what he's running from. Or towards.



        Equally, you could start the book where he doesn't want to run (over did it at the gym last night and his legs are really hurting today?) but by the end of the chapter, something else has happened that means you can end that chapter with "he ran."







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          I'm afraid I have to disagree with 'almost always'. I do like action books that kick off with an action scene and then fill in the blanks as the story progresses. But +1 for the rest of the answer.
          – Sara Costa
          Nov 30 at 11:47






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          And you are welcome to disagree and I can 100% see both sides of the argument on it. A book like the Martian wouldn't draw you in if Watney's first words weren't all the ways he could die having been left on Mars but equally, in Terry Pratchett's Night Watch, having his main character wake up in the past after the lightening strike wouldn't have worked if we hadn't seen him being a policeman and doing police work before this event.
          – Stephen
          Nov 30 at 13:05






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          @SaraCosta An Action Book may start off with action, because that IS the normal life of an MC like 007 or Han Solo. The danger of starting off with action is that the reader doesn't know any characters or whether they like them, thus the stakes for the reader are low, they don't care. Guy A and Guy B are shooting at each other and I'm not automatically invested in the MC or antagonistic toward the apparent villain, if the story is standalone. The normal world can have action or conflict in it, but the action should be there to let us get to know the MC and how they deal with things.
          – Amadeus
          Nov 30 at 16:25










        • @Stephen: Thanks. I'm afraid I may have made that comment a bit hotly. I've been looking for a book to offer, and I always read the first page at the store to get a feel for it. Unfortunately, I read over twenty beginnings and they were all so predictably 'normal life before the inciting incident' that when I read the first line of your answer with 'almost always' I just kind of blew. Sorry.
          – Sara Costa
          Dec 1 at 11:43






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          @SaraCosta Well, inconsequential "action" of that kind (running, changing a flat tire, moving about) is pretty much how I start every story. I was mistaken, I thought you were talking about a fight, not just an activity. I will agree with that, I never open with even one sentence of exposition or back-story or explanation; the first word of every book I write (at least on first draft) is the name of the MC doing something physical; usually related to her job or everyday life, and usually dealing with some every day kind of normal life problem or issue, a minor conflict creating interest.
          – Amadeus
          Dec 1 at 11:59














        • 1




          I'm afraid I have to disagree with 'almost always'. I do like action books that kick off with an action scene and then fill in the blanks as the story progresses. But +1 for the rest of the answer.
          – Sara Costa
          Nov 30 at 11:47






        • 1




          And you are welcome to disagree and I can 100% see both sides of the argument on it. A book like the Martian wouldn't draw you in if Watney's first words weren't all the ways he could die having been left on Mars but equally, in Terry Pratchett's Night Watch, having his main character wake up in the past after the lightening strike wouldn't have worked if we hadn't seen him being a policeman and doing police work before this event.
          – Stephen
          Nov 30 at 13:05






        • 1




          @SaraCosta An Action Book may start off with action, because that IS the normal life of an MC like 007 or Han Solo. The danger of starting off with action is that the reader doesn't know any characters or whether they like them, thus the stakes for the reader are low, they don't care. Guy A and Guy B are shooting at each other and I'm not automatically invested in the MC or antagonistic toward the apparent villain, if the story is standalone. The normal world can have action or conflict in it, but the action should be there to let us get to know the MC and how they deal with things.
          – Amadeus
          Nov 30 at 16:25










        • @Stephen: Thanks. I'm afraid I may have made that comment a bit hotly. I've been looking for a book to offer, and I always read the first page at the store to get a feel for it. Unfortunately, I read over twenty beginnings and they were all so predictably 'normal life before the inciting incident' that when I read the first line of your answer with 'almost always' I just kind of blew. Sorry.
          – Sara Costa
          Dec 1 at 11:43






        • 1




          @SaraCosta Well, inconsequential "action" of that kind (running, changing a flat tire, moving about) is pretty much how I start every story. I was mistaken, I thought you were talking about a fight, not just an activity. I will agree with that, I never open with even one sentence of exposition or back-story or explanation; the first word of every book I write (at least on first draft) is the name of the MC doing something physical; usually related to her job or everyday life, and usually dealing with some every day kind of normal life problem or issue, a minor conflict creating interest.
          – Amadeus
          Dec 1 at 11:59








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        I'm afraid I have to disagree with 'almost always'. I do like action books that kick off with an action scene and then fill in the blanks as the story progresses. But +1 for the rest of the answer.
        – Sara Costa
        Nov 30 at 11:47




        I'm afraid I have to disagree with 'almost always'. I do like action books that kick off with an action scene and then fill in the blanks as the story progresses. But +1 for the rest of the answer.
        – Sara Costa
        Nov 30 at 11:47




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        And you are welcome to disagree and I can 100% see both sides of the argument on it. A book like the Martian wouldn't draw you in if Watney's first words weren't all the ways he could die having been left on Mars but equally, in Terry Pratchett's Night Watch, having his main character wake up in the past after the lightening strike wouldn't have worked if we hadn't seen him being a policeman and doing police work before this event.
        – Stephen
        Nov 30 at 13:05




        And you are welcome to disagree and I can 100% see both sides of the argument on it. A book like the Martian wouldn't draw you in if Watney's first words weren't all the ways he could die having been left on Mars but equally, in Terry Pratchett's Night Watch, having his main character wake up in the past after the lightening strike wouldn't have worked if we hadn't seen him being a policeman and doing police work before this event.
        – Stephen
        Nov 30 at 13:05




        1




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        @SaraCosta An Action Book may start off with action, because that IS the normal life of an MC like 007 or Han Solo. The danger of starting off with action is that the reader doesn't know any characters or whether they like them, thus the stakes for the reader are low, they don't care. Guy A and Guy B are shooting at each other and I'm not automatically invested in the MC or antagonistic toward the apparent villain, if the story is standalone. The normal world can have action or conflict in it, but the action should be there to let us get to know the MC and how they deal with things.
        – Amadeus
        Nov 30 at 16:25




        @SaraCosta An Action Book may start off with action, because that IS the normal life of an MC like 007 or Han Solo. The danger of starting off with action is that the reader doesn't know any characters or whether they like them, thus the stakes for the reader are low, they don't care. Guy A and Guy B are shooting at each other and I'm not automatically invested in the MC or antagonistic toward the apparent villain, if the story is standalone. The normal world can have action or conflict in it, but the action should be there to let us get to know the MC and how they deal with things.
        – Amadeus
        Nov 30 at 16:25












        @Stephen: Thanks. I'm afraid I may have made that comment a bit hotly. I've been looking for a book to offer, and I always read the first page at the store to get a feel for it. Unfortunately, I read over twenty beginnings and they were all so predictably 'normal life before the inciting incident' that when I read the first line of your answer with 'almost always' I just kind of blew. Sorry.
        – Sara Costa
        Dec 1 at 11:43




        @Stephen: Thanks. I'm afraid I may have made that comment a bit hotly. I've been looking for a book to offer, and I always read the first page at the store to get a feel for it. Unfortunately, I read over twenty beginnings and they were all so predictably 'normal life before the inciting incident' that when I read the first line of your answer with 'almost always' I just kind of blew. Sorry.
        – Sara Costa
        Dec 1 at 11:43




        1




        1




        @SaraCosta Well, inconsequential "action" of that kind (running, changing a flat tire, moving about) is pretty much how I start every story. I was mistaken, I thought you were talking about a fight, not just an activity. I will agree with that, I never open with even one sentence of exposition or back-story or explanation; the first word of every book I write (at least on first draft) is the name of the MC doing something physical; usually related to her job or everyday life, and usually dealing with some every day kind of normal life problem or issue, a minor conflict creating interest.
        – Amadeus
        Dec 1 at 11:59




        @SaraCosta Well, inconsequential "action" of that kind (running, changing a flat tire, moving about) is pretty much how I start every story. I was mistaken, I thought you were talking about a fight, not just an activity. I will agree with that, I never open with even one sentence of exposition or back-story or explanation; the first word of every book I write (at least on first draft) is the name of the MC doing something physical; usually related to her job or everyday life, and usually dealing with some every day kind of normal life problem or issue, a minor conflict creating interest.
        – Amadeus
        Dec 1 at 11:59










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        The opening lines generally set the tone of the book. Why are you starting with your protagonist running? Is that the theme of the story, are they running away from something physical or emotional?



        Take the first line from Pride and Prejudice:



        "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife"



        That is indeed the main motivation of Bingley, Mr Colins and even Darcy and Wickham. It's also the preoccupation of (most) of the female characters. The opening line sets the expectations of the reader for what is going to follow.



        So my answer is to think about the overall theme of your story and write a beginning that informs the reader of the journey they are about to embark on. The art is doing that without being blatantly obvious about it.






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          I am free to disagree. People like twists.
          – rus9384
          Nov 30 at 10:33










        • Yes, I thought of exceptions as soon as I'd hit post. Not sure I should leave this answer up at all now.
          – Matt Hollands
          Nov 30 at 10:45










        • While it's true twists are great, I do believe most beginnings set the tone. Maybe you don't get sort of the theme for the whole novel in words, but that's another thing. If a story starts with someone running, for example, I expect that running (literally or figuratively) will be an important part of the plot.
          – Sara Costa
          Nov 30 at 11:43






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          Opening line of the Illiad: "Rage. Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles…" and yup, guess what the story is about, and it ends when that rage ends… Jane Austin is a fantastic opening because it seems a fact, then immediately sarcastic (TWIST!)..., but actually turns out to be real (TWIST AGAIN).
          – wetcircuit
          Nov 30 at 11:59

















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        The opening lines generally set the tone of the book. Why are you starting with your protagonist running? Is that the theme of the story, are they running away from something physical or emotional?



        Take the first line from Pride and Prejudice:



        "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife"



        That is indeed the main motivation of Bingley, Mr Colins and even Darcy and Wickham. It's also the preoccupation of (most) of the female characters. The opening line sets the expectations of the reader for what is going to follow.



        So my answer is to think about the overall theme of your story and write a beginning that informs the reader of the journey they are about to embark on. The art is doing that without being blatantly obvious about it.






        share|improve this answer

















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          I am free to disagree. People like twists.
          – rus9384
          Nov 30 at 10:33










        • Yes, I thought of exceptions as soon as I'd hit post. Not sure I should leave this answer up at all now.
          – Matt Hollands
          Nov 30 at 10:45










        • While it's true twists are great, I do believe most beginnings set the tone. Maybe you don't get sort of the theme for the whole novel in words, but that's another thing. If a story starts with someone running, for example, I expect that running (literally or figuratively) will be an important part of the plot.
          – Sara Costa
          Nov 30 at 11:43






        • 2




          Opening line of the Illiad: "Rage. Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles…" and yup, guess what the story is about, and it ends when that rage ends… Jane Austin is a fantastic opening because it seems a fact, then immediately sarcastic (TWIST!)..., but actually turns out to be real (TWIST AGAIN).
          – wetcircuit
          Nov 30 at 11:59















        up vote
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        up vote
        5
        down vote









        The opening lines generally set the tone of the book. Why are you starting with your protagonist running? Is that the theme of the story, are they running away from something physical or emotional?



        Take the first line from Pride and Prejudice:



        "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife"



        That is indeed the main motivation of Bingley, Mr Colins and even Darcy and Wickham. It's also the preoccupation of (most) of the female characters. The opening line sets the expectations of the reader for what is going to follow.



        So my answer is to think about the overall theme of your story and write a beginning that informs the reader of the journey they are about to embark on. The art is doing that without being blatantly obvious about it.






        share|improve this answer












        The opening lines generally set the tone of the book. Why are you starting with your protagonist running? Is that the theme of the story, are they running away from something physical or emotional?



        Take the first line from Pride and Prejudice:



        "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife"



        That is indeed the main motivation of Bingley, Mr Colins and even Darcy and Wickham. It's also the preoccupation of (most) of the female characters. The opening line sets the expectations of the reader for what is going to follow.



        So my answer is to think about the overall theme of your story and write a beginning that informs the reader of the journey they are about to embark on. The art is doing that without being blatantly obvious about it.







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          I am free to disagree. People like twists.
          – rus9384
          Nov 30 at 10:33










        • Yes, I thought of exceptions as soon as I'd hit post. Not sure I should leave this answer up at all now.
          – Matt Hollands
          Nov 30 at 10:45










        • While it's true twists are great, I do believe most beginnings set the tone. Maybe you don't get sort of the theme for the whole novel in words, but that's another thing. If a story starts with someone running, for example, I expect that running (literally or figuratively) will be an important part of the plot.
          – Sara Costa
          Nov 30 at 11:43






        • 2




          Opening line of the Illiad: "Rage. Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles…" and yup, guess what the story is about, and it ends when that rage ends… Jane Austin is a fantastic opening because it seems a fact, then immediately sarcastic (TWIST!)..., but actually turns out to be real (TWIST AGAIN).
          – wetcircuit
          Nov 30 at 11:59
















        • 2




          I am free to disagree. People like twists.
          – rus9384
          Nov 30 at 10:33










        • Yes, I thought of exceptions as soon as I'd hit post. Not sure I should leave this answer up at all now.
          – Matt Hollands
          Nov 30 at 10:45










        • While it's true twists are great, I do believe most beginnings set the tone. Maybe you don't get sort of the theme for the whole novel in words, but that's another thing. If a story starts with someone running, for example, I expect that running (literally or figuratively) will be an important part of the plot.
          – Sara Costa
          Nov 30 at 11:43






        • 2




          Opening line of the Illiad: "Rage. Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles…" and yup, guess what the story is about, and it ends when that rage ends… Jane Austin is a fantastic opening because it seems a fact, then immediately sarcastic (TWIST!)..., but actually turns out to be real (TWIST AGAIN).
          – wetcircuit
          Nov 30 at 11:59










        2




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        I am free to disagree. People like twists.
        – rus9384
        Nov 30 at 10:33




        I am free to disagree. People like twists.
        – rus9384
        Nov 30 at 10:33












        Yes, I thought of exceptions as soon as I'd hit post. Not sure I should leave this answer up at all now.
        – Matt Hollands
        Nov 30 at 10:45




        Yes, I thought of exceptions as soon as I'd hit post. Not sure I should leave this answer up at all now.
        – Matt Hollands
        Nov 30 at 10:45












        While it's true twists are great, I do believe most beginnings set the tone. Maybe you don't get sort of the theme for the whole novel in words, but that's another thing. If a story starts with someone running, for example, I expect that running (literally or figuratively) will be an important part of the plot.
        – Sara Costa
        Nov 30 at 11:43




        While it's true twists are great, I do believe most beginnings set the tone. Maybe you don't get sort of the theme for the whole novel in words, but that's another thing. If a story starts with someone running, for example, I expect that running (literally or figuratively) will be an important part of the plot.
        – Sara Costa
        Nov 30 at 11:43




        2




        2




        Opening line of the Illiad: "Rage. Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles…" and yup, guess what the story is about, and it ends when that rage ends… Jane Austin is a fantastic opening because it seems a fact, then immediately sarcastic (TWIST!)..., but actually turns out to be real (TWIST AGAIN).
        – wetcircuit
        Nov 30 at 11:59






        Opening line of the Illiad: "Rage. Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles…" and yup, guess what the story is about, and it ends when that rage ends… Jane Austin is a fantastic opening because it seems a fact, then immediately sarcastic (TWIST!)..., but actually turns out to be real (TWIST AGAIN).
        – wetcircuit
        Nov 30 at 11:59












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        You don't have to just say "He ran", your opening sets the stage for where the action takes place and gives us insight into the character. You can state things about the environment, what the character is thinking as he is running, what the character looks like or what their background may have been like before they had to run.




        Shadows danced over the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway as he ran past streetlights and illuminated windows.




        or




        It seemed as though the shadows themselves were chasing him as he ran through the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway, no matter how fast he ran the shadows kept up.




        or




        His tailored suit flapped wildly as he ran along the graffitied alleyway, his slicked back hair disheveled from his frantic running.







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          You don't have to just say "He ran", your opening sets the stage for where the action takes place and gives us insight into the character. You can state things about the environment, what the character is thinking as he is running, what the character looks like or what their background may have been like before they had to run.




          Shadows danced over the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway as he ran past streetlights and illuminated windows.




          or




          It seemed as though the shadows themselves were chasing him as he ran through the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway, no matter how fast he ran the shadows kept up.




          or




          His tailored suit flapped wildly as he ran along the graffitied alleyway, his slicked back hair disheveled from his frantic running.







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            You don't have to just say "He ran", your opening sets the stage for where the action takes place and gives us insight into the character. You can state things about the environment, what the character is thinking as he is running, what the character looks like or what their background may have been like before they had to run.




            Shadows danced over the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway as he ran past streetlights and illuminated windows.




            or




            It seemed as though the shadows themselves were chasing him as he ran through the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway, no matter how fast he ran the shadows kept up.




            or




            His tailored suit flapped wildly as he ran along the graffitied alleyway, his slicked back hair disheveled from his frantic running.







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            You don't have to just say "He ran", your opening sets the stage for where the action takes place and gives us insight into the character. You can state things about the environment, what the character is thinking as he is running, what the character looks like or what their background may have been like before they had to run.




            Shadows danced over the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway as he ran past streetlights and illuminated windows.




            or




            It seemed as though the shadows themselves were chasing him as he ran through the graffitied walls and dumpsters of the alleyway, no matter how fast he ran the shadows kept up.




            or




            His tailored suit flapped wildly as he ran along the graffitied alleyway, his slicked back hair disheveled from his frantic running.








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                Lots of fine answers here, and as many good choices for you. Starting with the running is great stuff if that's what your book is about. 'In medias res' is the formal phrase for it, and that tells you how often it happens.



                But don't underestimate the moments before the running starts. It doesn't have to be boring, it can definitely be used to ratchet up the tension. Maybe he spots one of his pursuers, but he doesn't know what the others look like. He tries to blend in with a group and casually exit, but then runs into the partner.



                Or maybe he's part of a group watching a dead-drop to see who collects the bundle of cash, and he's on the coms with his own partner. Then a maintenance truck blocks his view of the park bench, and by the time he gets through a crowd of people, the backpack is gone. He spots two people running in different directions!



                The point is, the reader knows weapons are about to be drawn, and the running will start any moment. You have a chance to define good guys and bad guys, and display a bit of your protagonist's personality while building tension. You're just tightening up the spring until it snaps and the running starts.






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                  Lots of fine answers here, and as many good choices for you. Starting with the running is great stuff if that's what your book is about. 'In medias res' is the formal phrase for it, and that tells you how often it happens.



                  But don't underestimate the moments before the running starts. It doesn't have to be boring, it can definitely be used to ratchet up the tension. Maybe he spots one of his pursuers, but he doesn't know what the others look like. He tries to blend in with a group and casually exit, but then runs into the partner.



                  Or maybe he's part of a group watching a dead-drop to see who collects the bundle of cash, and he's on the coms with his own partner. Then a maintenance truck blocks his view of the park bench, and by the time he gets through a crowd of people, the backpack is gone. He spots two people running in different directions!



                  The point is, the reader knows weapons are about to be drawn, and the running will start any moment. You have a chance to define good guys and bad guys, and display a bit of your protagonist's personality while building tension. You're just tightening up the spring until it snaps and the running starts.






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                    up vote
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                    Lots of fine answers here, and as many good choices for you. Starting with the running is great stuff if that's what your book is about. 'In medias res' is the formal phrase for it, and that tells you how often it happens.



                    But don't underestimate the moments before the running starts. It doesn't have to be boring, it can definitely be used to ratchet up the tension. Maybe he spots one of his pursuers, but he doesn't know what the others look like. He tries to blend in with a group and casually exit, but then runs into the partner.



                    Or maybe he's part of a group watching a dead-drop to see who collects the bundle of cash, and he's on the coms with his own partner. Then a maintenance truck blocks his view of the park bench, and by the time he gets through a crowd of people, the backpack is gone. He spots two people running in different directions!



                    The point is, the reader knows weapons are about to be drawn, and the running will start any moment. You have a chance to define good guys and bad guys, and display a bit of your protagonist's personality while building tension. You're just tightening up the spring until it snaps and the running starts.






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                    Lots of fine answers here, and as many good choices for you. Starting with the running is great stuff if that's what your book is about. 'In medias res' is the formal phrase for it, and that tells you how often it happens.



                    But don't underestimate the moments before the running starts. It doesn't have to be boring, it can definitely be used to ratchet up the tension. Maybe he spots one of his pursuers, but he doesn't know what the others look like. He tries to blend in with a group and casually exit, but then runs into the partner.



                    Or maybe he's part of a group watching a dead-drop to see who collects the bundle of cash, and he's on the coms with his own partner. Then a maintenance truck blocks his view of the park bench, and by the time he gets through a crowd of people, the backpack is gone. He spots two people running in different directions!



                    The point is, the reader knows weapons are about to be drawn, and the running will start any moment. You have a chance to define good guys and bad guys, and display a bit of your protagonist's personality while building tension. You're just tightening up the spring until it snaps and the running starts.







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                        Disclaimer: this answer relies on my own experience and may not fit your needs.



                        If you story starts with someone running, then there must be a lot of action later.



                        Even if it's wrong, this will be the first assumption of the reader while reading it.
                        I will not go in detail about this because Matt Hollands' answer is already covering it pretty well.



                        The same way, if you begin a book setting a date, let's say "2014", you unconsciously know the story will stretch on months or even years. But if you start with "monday", your whole story won't probably last more than a few days, which set different expectations to the reader.



                        If you begin In Medias Res, start answering question early instead of piling them.



                        Years ago I wrote a series of short stories that somehow get published in a small magazine, and the first one literally started with "He ran" ("He" being the name of the protagonist).



                        At the time, my litterature teacher told me it worked because within the next sentences, I was explaining the threat from who he was running from (who was after him and why), and the setting which was important for the rest of the story (empty streets after a curfew, troops of Guards looking for offenders, wanted posters with his face on it, etc.).



                        The important thing here is: your "this and that" must not be a filler. If your character is running, there is a reason for it and your firsts paragraphs must expand on that reason. If it is unrelated to what follows in the story, then your MC running may not be the good approach.



                        Then, when the threat is gone temporarily, the protagonist may rest and have a flashback about how he got there (probably not the best follow-up, but that's what I did at the time).



                        Now the whole "You probably wonder how I got there"-flashback thing may sound silly, but it is exactly what you see or read in most of action movies nowadays. It is the stinger, or the hook of the story. A little digest of what could happen later: action and mystery. Your "hook" reflects what the reader will find later in the book; if the reader adhere with your first chapter, you already know he will read the rest.






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                          Disclaimer: this answer relies on my own experience and may not fit your needs.



                          If you story starts with someone running, then there must be a lot of action later.



                          Even if it's wrong, this will be the first assumption of the reader while reading it.
                          I will not go in detail about this because Matt Hollands' answer is already covering it pretty well.



                          The same way, if you begin a book setting a date, let's say "2014", you unconsciously know the story will stretch on months or even years. But if you start with "monday", your whole story won't probably last more than a few days, which set different expectations to the reader.



                          If you begin In Medias Res, start answering question early instead of piling them.



                          Years ago I wrote a series of short stories that somehow get published in a small magazine, and the first one literally started with "He ran" ("He" being the name of the protagonist).



                          At the time, my litterature teacher told me it worked because within the next sentences, I was explaining the threat from who he was running from (who was after him and why), and the setting which was important for the rest of the story (empty streets after a curfew, troops of Guards looking for offenders, wanted posters with his face on it, etc.).



                          The important thing here is: your "this and that" must not be a filler. If your character is running, there is a reason for it and your firsts paragraphs must expand on that reason. If it is unrelated to what follows in the story, then your MC running may not be the good approach.



                          Then, when the threat is gone temporarily, the protagonist may rest and have a flashback about how he got there (probably not the best follow-up, but that's what I did at the time).



                          Now the whole "You probably wonder how I got there"-flashback thing may sound silly, but it is exactly what you see or read in most of action movies nowadays. It is the stinger, or the hook of the story. A little digest of what could happen later: action and mystery. Your "hook" reflects what the reader will find later in the book; if the reader adhere with your first chapter, you already know he will read the rest.






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                            If you story starts with someone running, then there must be a lot of action later.



                            Even if it's wrong, this will be the first assumption of the reader while reading it.
                            I will not go in detail about this because Matt Hollands' answer is already covering it pretty well.



                            The same way, if you begin a book setting a date, let's say "2014", you unconsciously know the story will stretch on months or even years. But if you start with "monday", your whole story won't probably last more than a few days, which set different expectations to the reader.



                            If you begin In Medias Res, start answering question early instead of piling them.



                            Years ago I wrote a series of short stories that somehow get published in a small magazine, and the first one literally started with "He ran" ("He" being the name of the protagonist).



                            At the time, my litterature teacher told me it worked because within the next sentences, I was explaining the threat from who he was running from (who was after him and why), and the setting which was important for the rest of the story (empty streets after a curfew, troops of Guards looking for offenders, wanted posters with his face on it, etc.).



                            The important thing here is: your "this and that" must not be a filler. If your character is running, there is a reason for it and your firsts paragraphs must expand on that reason. If it is unrelated to what follows in the story, then your MC running may not be the good approach.



                            Then, when the threat is gone temporarily, the protagonist may rest and have a flashback about how he got there (probably not the best follow-up, but that's what I did at the time).



                            Now the whole "You probably wonder how I got there"-flashback thing may sound silly, but it is exactly what you see or read in most of action movies nowadays. It is the stinger, or the hook of the story. A little digest of what could happen later: action and mystery. Your "hook" reflects what the reader will find later in the book; if the reader adhere with your first chapter, you already know he will read the rest.






                            share|improve this answer












                            Disclaimer: this answer relies on my own experience and may not fit your needs.



                            If you story starts with someone running, then there must be a lot of action later.



                            Even if it's wrong, this will be the first assumption of the reader while reading it.
                            I will not go in detail about this because Matt Hollands' answer is already covering it pretty well.



                            The same way, if you begin a book setting a date, let's say "2014", you unconsciously know the story will stretch on months or even years. But if you start with "monday", your whole story won't probably last more than a few days, which set different expectations to the reader.



                            If you begin In Medias Res, start answering question early instead of piling them.



                            Years ago I wrote a series of short stories that somehow get published in a small magazine, and the first one literally started with "He ran" ("He" being the name of the protagonist).



                            At the time, my litterature teacher told me it worked because within the next sentences, I was explaining the threat from who he was running from (who was after him and why), and the setting which was important for the rest of the story (empty streets after a curfew, troops of Guards looking for offenders, wanted posters with his face on it, etc.).



                            The important thing here is: your "this and that" must not be a filler. If your character is running, there is a reason for it and your firsts paragraphs must expand on that reason. If it is unrelated to what follows in the story, then your MC running may not be the good approach.



                            Then, when the threat is gone temporarily, the protagonist may rest and have a flashback about how he got there (probably not the best follow-up, but that's what I did at the time).



                            Now the whole "You probably wonder how I got there"-flashback thing may sound silly, but it is exactly what you see or read in most of action movies nowadays. It is the stinger, or the hook of the story. A little digest of what could happen later: action and mystery. Your "hook" reflects what the reader will find later in the book; if the reader adhere with your first chapter, you already know he will read the rest.







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